All Comments on 'Suddenly Something'

for a first time submission. A good story, well told, if a little verbose at times. The couple were very believable and well portrayed. Please remember that panty and brief are always in the plural in English, as in 'a pair of panties (or briefs)'. It is not necessary to use 'a pair of ....' each time, just panties or briefs..

I loved it i wished you could have done a switch when they were at the massage place when mona and the mother went into the shower with mona and let mona describe what they were doing while they were pleasuring each other.

Pat Murray

I liked this Story and though I may or may not agree with some of the other Comments it's still a Great Story. As a Mature Male myself I was totally awed by your descriptive TRUTHS of what happens in our Marriages. Please continue this Story and do take your time so that all the elements stay intact.

I found this story to be very romantic and exceptionally erotic. I do hope for more of this story, it was wonderful. Thank you for sharing this story with us, I look forward to more

fatafati....durdanto.....aro anek kichhur asha te roilaam...

Arjoon

A very plausable story that made me feel as if I was actually there. Was slightly dissapointed when it ended. I could have happily sat and read a lot more of that story

Cheers

Really romantic and more erotic

very arousing story. mature with this stuff really turns on

One of the top quartile entry in the Literotica; very hot but not vulgar. It is 'superb' in teasing, but 'average' in imagination.

thanks a lot for a nice story.

use of bangla is stimulatig.

This is a really awesome story that takes every one to their fantasy world.

It was a story to be enjoyed and get erotically aroused.

I loved ready and hope other authors will write like this.

Thanks

this is one of the most beautiful love stories that I have read

two mature adults giving to each other completely

you have caught all the feelings and emotions

I love your story

Very erotic, very well written, will wait for more from you

Superb written please more write.what a amazing erotic story.

I have read hundreds of stories over here. Certainly stands in top 3. Never imagined an Indian story narrated so beautifully that too erotic

Very well written, it was soo sensous

Sweet story brother. My wife and I made delicious sensual love after reading it. She was very wet. I want one go round with Olga! By the way my wife has a full bush and furry armpits, maybe she’d share a little with you? Cheers!

This is a very nicely written story. The pace of the story and the characterisation were very good. Being an older Indian male, it is very relatable as to how sex lives taper off, especially once kids are born. I am looking forward to more works from you. Good luck!!!