All Comments on 'Sue: High School Swordsman'

This looked, at the beginning, to be a fun, light-hearted romp of a story. The ending was such a downer, however, that it made me wish I hadn't bothered.

Why the downer at the end? Kind of ruined what was a pretty good, though not very believeable tale up til then.

Lots of spelling, grammatical errors, and you confused your characters names on more than one occasion. It was really distracting and killed any and all immersion. And while it's clearly a work of fiction, if you're going to try and pass it off as anything but that you need to formulate dialogue in a way that's not so... well, out there.

I can read through the "distractions" and enjoy the fantasy...would have liked it a little longer though with some more descriptions of those return visits!