All Comments on 'Sue Serves Several'

But you should have added a twist at the end where Sue is actually the one in charge and not her husband.

I enjoyed the story and the plot...but those damnable **FLASH** messages made my eyes hurt and made me lose my place inthe story a couple of times. Edit some of those out and you'll be good to go babe. =^_^=

Keep trying, the flash crap was a bother and I wouldn't share my woman either!

I had THAT twist in the ending, but it felt like it demolished the original intent. But there IS a followup in the wind around Sue's birthday..... nuff said...

...do you have a reason why you decimate a potentially fruitful plot line with an overabundance of mc reminders? It really( though it pains to say) only works in a "flash" story.

once in there life. Great depiction of the sex between each guest. I loved the serving of the dessert. Thx for a great story.

From: gandolf77

Really kept a alluring rather throughout the story. How do we see the photos?