All Comments on 'Sugar Heart Ch. 02'

I haven't cried this much over a story since...well, gee, I can't remember when!

This chapter made my heart hurt. We all have experienced that feeling of being totally alone w no one to turn to. When you feel hopeless and powerless. These two seem like they can be good together. More more more of this story!

This was beautiful. I couldn't stop reading. I felt every emotion. There's more to this story and I look forward to reading it. Nice job!

That was good , more please and soon.

I like it. Keep going. :)

I enjoy reading your stories. Please keep writing your wonderful story (stories?) with your talent!

If only every lonely soul could encounter someone like Buddy. Please share more of their love story.

This prevent a ride off the cliff

I am so loving this sweet story! Keep them coming.

i guess i was really lucky -- all my friends and family were super supportive.

This story is so sweet and heart-wrenching. It actually made me cry but then Buddy made me feel all better again.

I have read this story at least 3 times. I keep coming back to it.

This is amazing. You make it so realistic that I'm sitting here crying. I'm running out of stories to read, and I know I'm going to find it hard to find ones to challenge these

now i want cookies!

I wish there was sex

I love that one of your characters has a stutter, it's so rarely portrayed anywhere, and that you didn't depict it as a negative thing. My sister stutters and there's a lot of stigma associated with stuttering, it can be really hard to deal with. So thanks, it made me happy to read that.

Awww

I was browsing the twink tag and I found this story. I liked it at first but, Buddy, with his forgettable looks and stupid stutter was a major disappoinment.

I really like your writing style and the characters have caught my attention. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Devastating and captivating and, most importantly ... Hopeful. This chapter brought tears to my eyes more than once.

Beautiful, i just have to say it out loud.

While it may seem that Rick is the one that has nothing going for him presently, he is a strong brave kind-hearted man. His misguided parents, his cruel and homophobic friends, and his pitiful boss - on the other hand - have real problems that fill their lives with hate and disrespect. Of course, Buddy is a God-send. The commenter who derided his looks and stutter needs to be better - this man is a kind, loving, caring soul. I want to read more of their story.

This is probably one of the greatest most wonderful chapters I have ever read. It’s beautifully written and takes you from one emotion to another, that doesn’t feel forced.