All Comments on 'Sugar Heart Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I loved this story, I am so glad to see it continue. Will there be more?

kvegasgurlkvegasgurlover 8 years ago
It's back!

I was so happy to see this today. I hope there will be more Buddy and Richard!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Too freaking adorable. Buddy in beast mode is so cute. In glad things are looking up for Richard and you continued this story

daynedayneover 8 years ago
sweet

A very sweet romance and rather hot sex. I really enjoyed reading this. I mean, it even countered the effects of my prescription sleep meds!

canndcanndover 8 years ago

really adorable and funny. enjoyable story. can't help but pull for these two. I hope they get to disneyworld! :) I was happy his mom came around the way she did. And clearly Buddy had something to do with that too. The way Bernie and Jo are with them is great too. great story

mochakinkmochakinkover 8 years ago
Perfect

I didn't want it to end. So adorably hot those two. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please more!!!

I love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That was just...

The applause just killed me. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

didnt buddy have no phone? "On the bedside table, one of our phones buzzed with the arrival of a text message, which went blissfully ignored." anyway, LOVE your writing so much!

xowidgetxowidgetover 8 years ago
The Best in a Long Time

Thank you so very much for this well-paced series. I truly hope that it does not end here, or if it does, that you by all means continue writing more like this. Honestly, it reminds me of waiting months for my next yaoi manga when I was younger, the tension, the expectation, the rooting for the lovers, the great visuals, all of it. (As a side note: red heads really get me going, as does the attraction of such stark opposites.) Furthermore, it is so nice to see such love and acceptance on the part of one of your character's family for once; I know that it isn't the norm everywhere, perhaps, but it's a great part of the fairytale, not to mention it's becoming more the norm here in the States, as well as elsewhere I'm sure, which is fantastic. I was honestly rooting for Joanna and Bernie and Mrs. Callahan as must as the protagonists by Chapter 5! If this story line does continue, I look forward to perhaps seeing how our gents handle some deeper conflict of some sort. If not, then it can remain the perfect fairytale. Thank you again. Amazing, incredible work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More?!

Is that all ? Surely not. Just a bit more, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
:)

That was lovely...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Thi story was exquisite. The applause was a great touch to the ending.

ilovegibbsilovegibbsover 7 years ago
Wonderful!

Oh my goodness. I love this story. I have read it multiple times and I fall in love with Buddy and Richard each time. I cry and laugh and cheer with them as I read. Amazing. Please continue the series??? Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Incredible writing

Pls continue. .......thank you so much for dis beautiful story

wawferwawferabout 7 years ago
Omfg😆!!!!

Bernie in the end was icing on the cake 🤣😂. I freaking love this story. Please continue😆😁🎉🎊🎉😄

wawferwawferabout 7 years ago
Lol Couldn't help my self

I loved ❤️ This story so much I read it all over again. I kinda wish it was Published so I could hold the book 😁

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Absolutely brilliant

Just Thank You for this it was beautiful

SonicdaiseySonicdaiseyover 6 years ago
Brilliant!

I love this ending! I need more. Please please please give us another chapter. These boys are adorable!

JustaFujoshiJustaFujoshiabout 6 years ago
ADORABLE

I LOVE IT SO MUCH

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Amazzzziiiiinnnggggggg!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved the romance!

😍😍😍😍😍

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Cried More than Once! Fantastic

tamgreen -- this was amazing. Well written. The romance was beyond good, and not too far off of my experiences 20 years ago, except my Buddy is 6' 2".

I ****really****, r..r..really want another chapter or two. Their own place. !!! Disneyland !!!, a future. ;)

Love it & great job. A touching, sexy, feel good story.

My_Pretty_Kitty_KatMy_Pretty_Kitty_Katabout 5 years ago
Love it!

I have reread this story multiple times and I LOVE IT!! More chapters, please!!

oshirixxxaioshirixxxaiabout 5 years ago
A Fucking round of applause.

What a grand story, with a grand finaly. Thank you for the read. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
fucking Awesome

i stayed up just to read all 5 chapters i LOVED it i cried and laughed and was horny as hell all at the same time lol i am a mess lol. Am a fan for sure, your stories had a bit of everything loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
2 thumbs up!

Your stories are great. Binged all of them. Thanks

MickeyKayMickeyKayabout 3 years ago

I'm in Total agreement with the last few comments, didn't read all but I LOVE ALL of your stories!!! I didn't just binge on this one I binged on ALL of them!!! Its taken a couple of days but I just could NOT not read ALL of your works!!! Exceptional spelling and writing! I too laughed, cried, got turned on etc. etc. You and your stories are one of the few I've read ALL the works of and would LOVE to read MORE!!! Five star rating on ALL as well as added A Lot to my favorites, I've got LOTS!!! Of many different categories. You are one of my favorite authors too!! EVERY story was its OWN story! You've got ZERO problems with being able to make them each their own! Not many people can do that and I LOVE when I come across ones who can!!! Thank You! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!! For all the laughs and Everything else as well!!!! EXCEPTIONAL!!!!

Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar08about 3 years ago

Absolutely my favorite. Wish more stories could be like this one.

sgmindsgmindabout 3 years ago

Oh sheee-yyuuut, that's the end of this story! Ever want to add more on how the boys progressed, I for one would love to read it. Meanwhile, want to adopt Bernie! LOL

CasualnagaCasualnagaalmost 3 years ago

There are few authors who can write stories that rope me into feeling for the characters.

Bravo!

justanotherspectatorjustanotherspectatorover 2 years ago

This story is sickeningly sweet! I didn't even realize the moment it ended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story! I loved it.🥰🥰🥰 keep writing more stories. Thank you!

bittersweetoptimismbittersweetoptimismover 1 year ago

OH this story was so so sweet!! Just. Absolutely adorable. I have a speech impediment, and while it’s mild enough that I don’t think about or notice it very often (by that I mean I literally do not notice when I’m slurring sounds) it still feels really good to get some representation on that front. Also, would like to reiterate: adorable. So so cute. These characters are so fucking charming and I love them. Amazing work!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Absolutly awsome! The story made me laugh, cry and turned on. You are a real artist! Thanks for sharing!!!

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