All Comments on 'Sugaring: Olivia and Jasmine'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
well written

I must say, you did a great job on this. Good story, i could see it all playing out in my minds eye and it got me thoroughly aroused!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great storytelling.

The prose is evocative. Great work.

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Hello everyone! I'm just like you; I enjoy writing my fantasies out and sharing them with others. I want to improve as a writer so I'm open to constructive feedback.