All Comments on 'Sugary Sweet'

They were just moving along thru life and suddenly banging on the pool table? How did that happen?

wait what?

seriously, this should have been one long story or something b/c everything was going along nicely then BAM! they're going at it on the pool table....

this doesnt make sense.

You spent a good while building up to the inevitable, but then it ended in a few short sentences. Needs to be longer, otherwise, a good story.