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Spurious ScribeSpurious Scribeabout 20 years ago
Excellent description

I truly got into this story. More so than with many that I read. I think it is the writer's ability to describe the action of his characters in an erotic, yet different way.

Examples:

"...feeling the fullness that she longed for..."

"...she felt his thickness move across her well-lubricated slit.."

"...velvety steel..." <-- My personal favorite!

I could go on, but that's the idea. In some ways, this story reads like an erotic romance.

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