by Im_A_Dickens
I truly got into this story. More so than with many that I read. I think it is the writer's ability to describe the action of his characters in an erotic, yet different way.
Examples:
"...feeling the fullness that she longed for..."
"...she felt his thickness move across her well-lubricated slit.."
"...velvety steel..." <-- My personal favorite!
I could go on, but that's the idea. In some ways, this story reads like an erotic romance.