All Comments on 'Suite, Shower, and Sites'

I really hpoe I will one day be so fortunate to enjoy a weekend like this. Keep on writing.

The story suffers from a common problem that of needing an editor or a good proof reading prior to posting. Things such as "there legs" which should be "their legs" would be found and corrected. So GET AN EDITOR.

FUCKING HOT STORY!!!!! My cock hardened soon into it and stayed hard until I had to stroke it to relieve the pressure about a third of the way through part 1. You know how to put the words together - if I could do half as well I might try to submit some stuff here.