All Comments on 'Sultry Samantha Ch. 01'

great start had me really going but terrably short. could have been alot better

Seems to be a good start, I'm interested in knowing where you'll go from here...

I'm looking dorwaed to chapter 2. This could get good.

I really liked the way it begun. It might have been a tad short for some people, but this is the INet, not everything needs be a freakin' novel. Keep up the good work, and I look foward to part two.

It would seem that the author is a bit of a temptress herself by keeping the beginning of this saga short.Nicely done, good lead in to what could turn out to be a great story line, please just don't make it 35 chapters of the same.

good part one.. i will definately read any other stories you wtite

more!!

>"Why not," he thought to himself, "it's not like Sam is home to catch me."

how in the world would she 'catch' you anyway? What, do you not jack off if she isn't home? Silly!

>Then suddenly the bathroom door opened and his daughter was standing >there watching him pleasure himself.

except the shower door or curtain would be fogged up and she really wouldn't 'see' anything. Gotta love plotholes, lol! Obviously she knew exactly what daddy was doing and dressed appropriately ;)

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