All Comments on 'Summer Boy Ch. 02'

by TrueNorth1969

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SpotsmageeSpotsmageealmost 13 years ago
Oh God

This is worst than waiting for new episodes of Naruto to air. I'm usually very patient but good God.

SpotsmageeSpotsmageealmost 13 years ago
Just to clarify

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Great story and I am fine with the slow build up but a back story about how Adam gained his sexual experience and confidence would inject some immediate spice while we wait for the real time events with Lynn.

TrueNorth1969TrueNorth1969almost 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you for your message and your suggestion "anonymous". It does sound a helpful character point for Adam. While Chapter 3 has already been submitted for posting, I'll consider how I could work it into Chapter 4.

And thanks for your enthusiasm Spotsmagee! Glad you're still enjoying it.

TN1969

SpotsmageeSpotsmageealmost 13 years ago
You could have told me that before I put your penis into my mouth!

I did not expect that flash back at all but it was definitely my favorite part of chapter two. Lynn is fragile and I love it! Not so happy with the creepy friends internet video side plot, I'm hoping we don't see any more of that and please keep Cassie on the dumbed down side. I'd hate for her to interfere with Adam and Lynn.

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