All Comments on 'Summer Boy Ch. 03'

Very good pay off for what felt like such a long build up, I've been smiling like an idiot since I started reading!

Cassie is going to do something stupid.... I just know it! So, since from adam is leaving is there moment a one-night thing?

With this chapter you easily have become one of my favorite writers here. I love your constantly shifting vocabulary, great sense of detail in setting (the lack of AC with the heat, the sweat, the open windows and sun etc. ) and pitch perfect dialogue as Adam makes his case. And yes, the sex scene was totally Hot! The best choice though was Adam's transition from "cocky" flirtation to serious, mature resolve. It was the one side of him that Lynn needed to see before she could realistically give herself to him. I still wouldn't mind a little back story on how Adam has become so experienced but no second guessing here. This story is in very capable hands! Thanks for the obvious effort you put into it and can't wait for the next chapter! --Music Man.