All Comments on 'Summer by the Sea Pt. 01'

Nice coming of age story. Keep writing

What a fabulous fantasy!

Great story and what a lucky guy - I wish I could be naked with 3 gorgeous girls.

I enjoyed this story a lot. I definitely agree with the previous comments. Adam is one lucky young man to

experience what he did. However, the story is not to be taken very seriously as none of the characters seem to be at all concerned about their promiscuity or the consequences of their actions. The only thing realistic is that Jennie insisted that Adam use a condom. The character development is weak. Are these real people? Having said that, I got very turned on reading the story. Being a long-time exhibitionist who has been to clothing optional beaches, I can relate to the young man's thrill at showing his erection to the young ladies. But this story goes beyond mere exhibitionism as Adam gets to sow his oats with these lovely girls who are eager to explore their sexuality with him. Obviously, he has been blessed.

@exhibitionistguy

Thank you for taking the time to give some detailed feedback.

Not sure that it is all fair, but I will certainly think about it.

Don't take the critic to heart. They actually do not need to be concerned about consequences as long as they are being careful. Just having a fun summer, I'm sure they will look back with fond memories. I know I do.

Concerning the Anonymous comment, I agree that you should not take my criticism too much to heart. I did not say that I didn't enjoy reading the story. I was just trying to provide constructive feedback. Don't you want that? It was not my intention to be unfair. My suggestion was that the character development could be better. On the other hand, a more serious character development could take away from the story. It is a fun read as it is. I also agree that the characters would not need to be concerned about the physical consequences of their actions as long as they are careful.

@exhibitionistguy

NP, I do value constructive criticism and I meant what I said about thinking about it.