All Comments on 'Summer Camp Ch. 01'

Pretty good although plenty of typos (shift instead of shaft, tress instresd of trees, etc.) Quite a lot of the content submitted has this problem but still gets rated well... However, you shouldn't write to the lowest common denominator either. :) Typos are distracting, otherwise the chapter reads well. Good luck.

I liked it too. You really should go back and re-read what you've writen, although typo's a abound everywhere. I'd write it, print it, read/correct in other words--- Edit ....... hope to see the next chapter, maybe 2 pages ?

This is a good start to a story, i hope to see more, longer, chapters.