All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 14 Gwen's Story 2'

Awsome descriptive writing. I hope I get half as good as you. I am reading all your works right now.

he avoids kissing her he avoid sucking on her boobs rather he sadistically pinches and pull hard on her nipples

he never went down on her but made her give him a bj

very much like how alan treated jessica

he seems bipolar he said it would never happen again but raped her almost

he remained clothed but he fucked her completely naked he treated her like a prostitute even though he knows she is a virgin in love with him

he took her pics naked not even caring that it could ruin her life he someone found it and blackmailed her into sex trafficking

he has no intention to stay with her love her care for her but has no shame in taking 2/3 of her virgin holes and that too in a humiliating way

he came inside her not even worried abt pregnancy

he want to establish the fact that she is putty in his hands and she ll do anything for him and he wont even return her love

a sad one sided love story where the young naive girls gives everything but gets her heartbroken and slutshamed in the end sorry but you are glorifying his betrayal control and manipulation

hate this 2 stars

completely cold sex as if he is fucking an alley slut and not a sweet school girl in love

intimacy zero

romance zero

just dominant fkknn

she wants him to touch her carass her hold him embrace him

but he doesnt give a fk abt her

he is a selfish lover

her orgasm is purely coz she is highly sexual being any gud man can make her orgasm she deserves better someone who cares about her needs and isnt as selfish as this bastard who doesnt even care that she is very new to sex and needs a little more kisses, romance and intimacy and a lot less dominance and cold sex

the sex would have been gud if she was bored with vanilla but since its not the case this bastard sucks pretty sure he is gonna fuck her ass nxt ,take some pic and then abandons her forever leaving her heartbroken

she deserves better someone who saturates her with vanilla and romance before moving to hot dominating one