by TheTyke
Your style is unique. You should never stop writing. Please continue this story and soon.
My reaction to this story was revulsion at the thought that the sicko vicar was getting away with this. Every turn of the page found me wanting people returning early to find the sick schmuck out - maybe Jackie seeing what's happening and blowing a gasket as only she seems to be able to do. A public defrocking, combined with a sympathetic acceptance of Pat into the Sue - Jackie - Wendy circle of sexuality is needed to put this right for me.
The summer series are great, we are at chapter 21 that means there are another 10 to come.
It is over a year since this last one, do not keep us waiting much longer.
I nearly passed out from the arousal this story created. Well done!