by RachaelAlba
This feels more like the start of a story than a complete one, both from not explaining the source of her strength gain, and stopping right after she goes to bed with the male teacher. If this is just Part 1, it should say so.
Look at the very beginning. It says it is Book ! of the Series. It is not good when people criticize and carp in ignorance.
This is a quality story. The author is very adept. I hope the lack of comments per se, and the poor quality of the first one, do not discourage her. I suspect that there are many who appreciate the story since at least 3 have marked it as a Favorite.
The lead character had just the right blend of strength and thoughtfulness. Very sexy! My only query is why so few details of the boat trip? I think this missed a good opportunity to show how she was dealing with her 'changes'.