by Voboy
There's a reason i follow you.
Love your words - "stucco of sand" "You stepped on me" "You stepped on me"
Extremely hot. Promises, hooks you i, and delivers.
Pretty awesome.
Great story and so well written. Certainly deserving of the 5 stars I have given it. Not sure why someone would get lost by the fourth page but obviously not someone who likes more than just sex in a story.
that guy so-so lucky. If in real, life that happened to us?mmm. the guy in this story, is one lucky mature S.O.B
Such a great story! Absolutely loved it, loved the little details, the plot, the writing itself... thanks for sharing this great story with us!!
Wow. Thank you for having actual writing skills - such a HUGE difference when someone takes the time to describe people, impressions, *knowingly* leading us through hot, then steamy, then wonderfully dirty encounters. Everything is vivd, fresh, *utterly believable*.
In a sea of half-warm body-measure enumerations, your characters come to life and you've set the bar high, Sir! Thank you for this.