All Comments on 'Summer Film Study'

by Voboy

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regularguy13regularguy13over 6 years ago
Excellent again

There's a reason i follow you.

Love your words - "stucco of sand" "You stepped on me" "You stepped on me"

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It started so well

But it lost me by page four.

MetamorphoseMetamorphoseover 6 years ago
Superbly written

Extremely hot. Promises, hooks you i, and delivers.

Pretty awesome.

Sailman66Sailman66over 6 years ago
Fantastic read.

Great story and so well written. Certainly deserving of the 5 stars I have given it. Not sure why someone would get lost by the fourth page but obviously not someone who likes more than just sex in a story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
excellent

that guy so-so lucky. If in real, life that happened to us?mmm. the guy in this story, is one lucky mature S.O.B

BerowulffBerowulffover 5 years ago
I love it!

Such a great story! Absolutely loved it, loved the little details, the plot, the writing itself... thanks for sharing this great story with us!!

sweetzebrasweetzebraalmost 4 years ago
Well written, steamy hot, naughty - immersive.

Wow. Thank you for having actual writing skills - such a HUGE difference when someone takes the time to describe people, impressions, *knowingly* leading us through hot, then steamy, then wonderfully dirty encounters. Everything is vivd, fresh, *utterly believable*.

In a sea of half-warm body-measure enumerations, your characters come to life and you've set the bar high, Sir! Thank you for this.

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All but a few of my stories are linked together; they all take place in a common "universe" that, frankly, I'd love to live in. So any character in any story is, eventually, fair game to have themselves a wild time with any other character. I've gotten a list together that co...