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irishkenny1974irishkenny1974about 11 years ago
Short and hot

Other than a few minor editing issues, well done!

ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago

Quite nicely done, but giving the characters actual names would both have grounded them more in reality and avoided the constant "he" and "she" references.

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