All Comments on 'Summer of '75'

Liked the story but the grammar and spelling need cleaning up big time.

Great series. hope you follow up with ome of one you are fifty and use the powder on thirtish snotty women. Maybe at first your bitchy boss at work.

Great story and plot line, ok I have only read the first couple chapters but they were hottt! Looking forward to reading more of your work, once again great job!

wat started out as mind control turned into bdsm

I literally came reading this story and rubbi g myself. Great author great story!!!!

You need to proof read your stories or get someone who speaks English to proof read

The story. Good story though, but I found myself feeling sorry for Kerri

I made it to page 6 before the misused words and incorrect spelling just got to be too much. Please get an editor, or maybe fricking read your own stories before publishing. I’m okay with a few errors but this is just ridiculous. A waste of the reader’s time.

This story had my dick and tongue both hard!!! My mouth is watering like crazy too! I loved all the oral sex, cum swallowing and piss drinking! Thank you for a fantastic story!

Absolutely full of typos and misspelled words. You'd think the author would have checked it before publishing.

Chemical mind control premise began okay but turned into absolutely unjustifiable sadistic rape tale with the male protagonist ceding all responsibility for his actions to the sister he had "programmed".

Why didn't he just "dust" his mom & pop and keep his rape fantasies all in the family?

Clearly a mentally disturbed individual.

I LOVED the theme, but the spelling and the syntax errors were very annoying. YOMEYO