All Comments on 'Summer of Discovery Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Feedback?

Thoughts? Feelings? More? Different?

beachbaby179beachbaby179over 10 years ago
aw shucks...

you're welcome :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Awesome more please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I've never been into BDSM...

I only read this because of the 'sister' angle...I can see where this may have LOTS of sharing...between Brooke instructing Alex...then getting Greg to instruct them both...KEEP WRITING! *W*

William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
Don't rest on your laurels

But in my opinion you are writing some super pornographic fiction--really good stuff.

Wish I could give you more tha a 5.

Keep it up!!!!!

ObscurelogicObscurelogicover 10 years ago
MORE

I am really really enjoying your story. I'd have to say I was a bit incredulous when I read the first chapter but the subsequent chapters have explained all my doubts away. Good job. Wish this chapter were longer...I really didnt want it to end :)

adgeonadgeonover 10 years ago
Yes, longer chapters please

and I think Greg should have a session with both Nina and Brooke lol.

surrendermesurrendermeover 10 years ago
You are on a roll!!!

Please keep them coming. I just love a cheer leader slut!

redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

dont cross the couples. let the younger learn from the older,but leave them as seperate pairs it will give nina and alex a chance to actually develope their relationship before someone else messes it up.

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