All Comments on 'Summer of Servitude'

this very erotic story. I'd love to be a fly on the wall to watch and perhaps even be Erin.

More focused on the eroticism of domination than the crude titilating details, and yet highly arousing.

More please, don't end it there. There is plenty more to go. PLEASE.

maybe even some girl on girl action

i liked it. well paced and interesting style, keep it up

I loved this story! Very hot. The sort of teasing leading up to Erin being taken was done very well. As well as her reaction to it each time. Experiecing both some shame and arousal as well. Just nicely done with this story. Really wanted to be Erin as well (or more accurately my coworker Teresa as Erin..)

Anyway, I hope you do write more. Either more chapters here or more stories like this. Great job!

MenaTV

I love stries like this. A mature mother seduced into subimmion and spanked with her hairbrush by her son's teen-aged friends!

keep going. i love submission/reluctance stories. have all of her new "friends" take her over and over eventually getting her pregnant

Very well written. Consistent, believable, and highly erotic. Quality stories like this one deserve recognition.

ad please continue the story

I really enjoyed the story. I do wish there had been some mention of her husband. It would add spice if he was around and at first oblivious, and then finally submissively accepting of his wife's degradation.

Dear RallyWeasel,

You consistently write great, stirringly sexual stories,, yet this is the only one on which you allow comments. Why is that? Your other tales deserve compliments also, particularly your student/teacher ones. I, for one, would like to give you high marks for all your stories, if only you let me and others to do so. Enough said.

YOMEYO

Good writing. Nice tension and angst as Erin struggles with her inner need to submit. Well done.

A really great read. Well constructed and nicely believable.

Well done story, really enjoyed it..b

Very well written. Love your writing style.

A lot more with the boys away

So wrong and yet so right...

So why end it there, each new boy would treat her differentl .. no doubt there is plenty of room for this to continue.