by woody_strokem
So much hot build up and such a hot fuck! I want more! Kinky, filthy, dirty fucking! Loved it! Was so hard I wanted to cum when she first massaged him! Thanks and waiting for more to cum!
One of the best stories on this site. I wish I could give it a higher rating than five. Please continue !
I love "loving" stories where the people involved, including family members really love each other. I have had enough of the "wham bam thank you ma'am" sex stuff. So thank you for a wonderful loving sex story. Keep more coming.
Just want to let you know that this is one of the best stories I've ever read on this site or any other one. The build-up was at the exact right pace to keep someone excited without losing interest. And the result of the story was simply awesome. Very good use of words and grammar as well. Thank you.
I loved this story so much that I am beggin g you to continue it so that we know what happens with the two of them
It's impossible to improve on what you wrote .You refused to let me take my eyes of your story of love and lust and it was highly sexy without being nasty ; you did good .Many thanks and I hope you have more to follow .
This is one of the best stories that I've read here in a long time. Please write another part to this story
Wonderful, erotic, sensative and thought provoking.
You must continue their explorations.
A well written and beautiful story. Please consider continuing their story.
Many thanks!!!
AWESOME WORK! This was a great story from all angles - looking forward to a follow up....!
There is not a hotter memory than the first time my sister and I fooled around. Thank you for bringing those special days back to life for me. Well written. I jerked off several times, each one more intense as you brought brother and sister closer and closer to fucking. Keep up the good work.
I know I'm a little late in welcoming you back, Woody, but Welcome back! I have so missed your wonderful stories and I am glad you're writing again. You're my favorite author on literotica!
Despite the 2 fonts, and mispellings, it was very good....hope you'll continue with them...a series/novella.
You are a great author. This story was exciting the whole way through. Kept me cumming more than once.
I spent summers working on the farm and probably was as horny as this couple. I just didn't always have my sister's beautiful body around to stare at all the time. On the several occasions we were able to get together on a hot summer night we were able to rub our genitals together as was described here until we were able to get off. The action described was at almost the same pace as ours and it made me so horny to recall those hot summer nights that I nearly exploded in my own pants. How I wish I could return to those lovely hormone filled nights. Great writing! Please continue.
Great writing, in this as well as the rest of your stories that I've read... you have some real talent and should probably try publishing something if you haven't already.
thanks for a wonderful story....I plan to read more of your work.....very erotic. This one gave me more than one orgasm as I read it........thanks.
If you really, honestly consider it, there can be no love stronger than that between siblings. Legalities aside, the love of blood relation HAS to be strong...why fight it!
I only gave this story five stars because i couldn't find the sixth. Great writing, great pacing and very believable while still maintaining that hint of fantasy that makes this kind of story guilt-free and so much more enjoyable. (Oh, did i forget to mention that it's HOT?!)
Thank you for sharing your gifts with us!
it did deserve a 5 star specially wen the winter changed to summer after reading this story. Desperately a hot one to read and re- read
it seems you don't know how to finish a story i have read all your incest stories and you never finished any of them what a waste SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND SOME RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR
A story with sex in it rather than a story where the people in it are like hamsters in a box crawling all over each other- l think those are written for the ADD people, they can't concentrate more than a paragraph so you have to constantly throw something new at them. Keep writing
This is one of the best I have read on Literotica. I wish you would do a few more. You haven't done one for some time!
I kind of felt that they didn't show a lot of concern over playing with each other when they're related, but hey, you took the time to set the story up really well, so it's all good :) I liked it, and I'd read more
as usual for this writer, and it seems this site, again we have an unfinished story that wasted our time. it seems maybe woody got splinters stroking it while writing and didn't want to get more finishing his stories. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED OR DON'T BOTHER STARTING AT ALL.
Pretty-much the same type of comment as all those before me!
It was the best "Massage/Incest" story I've read on Literotica - ever - and after getting to 33 pages of searching for "massage/incest", I've read a few!
Very well done - great story - highly believable - well executed....and as for the other anonymous feedback that suggested it "wasn't finished" : I totally disagree - it was ended at a perfect spot - and no doubt easy for you (the author) to pick up and continue from, if there's to be a sequel.
Thanks for the enjoyment of a very good read...just wish I'd had a sister, huh?
no background on the characters and no endding we just get left hanging. where are the parents? what happens at the end of summer? does he leave and go to college? does she leave and find a job? do they ever fuck again? this would have been a good story IF it had been brought to a proper finish perhaps they could both stay and keep having sex and after the parents retire run the farm as a couple. YOU REALLY NEED TO START FINISHING YOUR HALF ASSED STORIES. if you don't want to finish then find someone that will.
Yummy yummy. It was a long one but I loved it. It seriously got me going.
This is my absolute favorite of all of the stories on this site.
Great story. I especially like the "Peeping Tom" of the sister. Usually it is always the brother that in spying.
Wow! I loved this story! Such an intense build up using the playfulness and the inching closer and closer each time. I felt like I was experiencing it myself. One of the best stories I've read..well done!!
I really enjoyed this tale and hope you continue to write more of them.
I read all of your stories and can hardly wait for the next one!
What a great story, fantastic and the whole four pages just flowed perfectly. 5 is max score we can give so how about 5 x 5. Thank you very much. !!!
You had it all in this story.....This is my second reading and it was JUST AS GOOD THIS TIME....I know I will read it again.
How about a second chapter? What about after the summer?
I WANT MORE !!!!!
Love how you told your story. It took me back when my sister wanted to see her older brothers cock. What I didn't know was that she had seen me masturbate and wanted to suck my cock so she could feel me cu m in her mouth and swallow it. She was really good at sucking me off. We did this until I got married and then one more time.😃 Thanks for sharing. Big brother in Colonial Heights
But the end, when they actually fucked was much too rushed.
Could have been five stars. I gave it four.
Must agree with previous comments. Great storyline and build up but for me you up fucked up the ending big time. It was far to rushed. It nearly four pages for them to get there. You could easily continue on with this story and I’m sure a lot of the others readers would like to see this story continue on as well. Give it some thought..
it was good and can't say it was bad. Way, way too much build up and in the end she didn't cum. What a fucking let down. I always let my woman cum first. It makes my climax 10 times better. This story should have been 2 pages max.
As stated above, while she had orgasms from the frottage play, she didn't cum from the intercourse. Disappointing! I'm sure they went on to many nights of bliss. Unlike a LOT of the commenters above, i think you ended it at just the right time! If only those readers used their imaginations, they could make up where it went from there in their own minds.
No mention of birth control, so i'm surprised no previous commenter begged for her to be pregnant soon. Just one more thing they can fantasize about. Growing up on a farm, i'd bet siblings would more often than not be up in each other's bidness! Watching barnyard animals hump away tends to bring out the horny, especially watching a stallion have his way with his brood mare! Love this story. You have a gift! Thanks ever so much for sharing it with us! Love your nom de plume!