All Comments on 'Summer Release'

by whatmighthavebeen

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ausvirgoausvirgoabout 10 years ago
just a tease

stopped just as it should have been getting going! :-(

1Browneyedguy1Browneyedguyabout 10 years ago
Nice but

way too short..... I'd would have liked to read more.

Hope it continues

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Too short

Great start, but it was just getting started.

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
She Had A Plan****

What a lucky so and so. Thanks for sharing this little quickie!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good Start

I liked the story, good concept, but you should have drawn it out a little, you could have gone into more detail about what he did to her, then talked about they was they had sex.

Really a good start.

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