by MemberX
The way you've built up to this point, and the realistic character portrayals, makes this story very believable. And for me at least, that makes it MUHC more erotic.
Would have preferred if you had wrote from a male perspective though.
Check out Chapter 4, which should go live any time now...
By building to the crossing of boundries the story seems much more realistic than most whgich makes it one of the best. Mentioning Kathy not being on birth control could take this to a dark place though...but again realistic.
Hello from Greece! love is great! I like that the story is written from a woman's perspective. thats great. however, i would like to point out that i am regretful that i had a girlfriend and transmitted her genital herpes without telling her about that. it was awful. she may have problems in pregnancy. it is a life time disease. no cure exists. some people are taking drugs their whole life for that!