All Comments on 'Summer Studies'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

as far as i know masterbating the patient isnt part of the exam and if there wasnt a nurse or her mom in there with her then that is wrong, but if there was then that is worse

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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You lost me (and probably others) with this: Em, did you take a crap today? There's a bunch of cling-ons around your ass hole.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Imaginative!

Interesting that AFTER the exam she was suggesting new ways to practice +++plus+++ new ways for her to explore his sex! One assumes this will lead to progressively more intimate activities, which I presume the author is already preparing to share with us.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
dumb

the whole story was just to dumb and unrealistic sounding.

RockyStoneRockyStonealmost 12 years ago
Well it was a story

This story really didn't have much erotic zip for me. No erotic value to me at all, really. He gave her orgasms and she blew him, but no descriptive content. The chances you had to add the erotic, you didn't do it.

RS

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Interesting excuse for having fun. It was fun to read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Liked it

Well I liked it and thought it was pretty erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
how old were you'se ?

zucchni in pussy no busting hymen ?

never watch porn ?

get into it lick her pussy arse stick your salami in her pussy up her bum

would like to hear what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
very good story all the way around. hope you write more!

very good story all the way around. hope you write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I personally prefer not use the word "cunt" so much for such a light pair of characters, but I enjoyed the story. Hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Continue please!

Great story! Would love to read the continuation - and see how the sister deals with the prostate exam...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
not bad but not good

they seem a little naive for their ages she sounds more like 11-12 not 18-19. as said by others NO HYMEN if he was in college he should have noticed and asked about it. you need to think more before writing this could have used more background and needs a second or third chapter to finish it off properly.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchabout 11 years ago

A little stilted and hard to buy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

oh he doesn't know what he's missing...when she's warmed up, it feels so hot to have

my hand inside her. stroking, twisting, petting her cervix. then release.

Anonymous
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