by Tx Tall Tales
I was feeling below average after all those Literotica stories about 10-12" gentleman's accessories, but if this story has it right, I can hold my head up with the other upper 3%ers.
Damn, now I'm gutted my summer job was pumping gas and not using my god-given talents.
Enjoyed the read.
I see this story was done some time ago. Hopefully you’ll be inspired to continue it.
Definitely 5 stars. I know you are busy writing other good stories. When you have a chance more please.
Wow. Great 5 star story. Where do I apply? I did not know I was in the 3 percent. I have been complimented but I thought women said that to all the guys.
It seems a shame that there aren't further parts but I enjoyed it very much.
Cute little story. You promised years ago about continuing, how about.it?
LeB
I loved it! Realistic dialogue and pacing in an unrealistic story, but realism is vastly overrated.
not talking about the whole boy toy sex slave it's just that there's no way an 18 year old wouldn't know his penis length down to the milliliter and how it compares to the average in various categories such as his in class,city,country,continent,world,compared to others of the same race and of others his age etc ....
Sandy needs to told that the mask only works one way. His identity should be protected as well.
Very entertaining and very enjoyable! Looking forward to more!
I do hope that you follow up on it. What a way to pop your cherry both of there's. Entertaining story about a nerdy young man and Sandra WOW. If I were him I would try and get as much practice in as possible and suggest to Sandra that I would be okay with her keeping me in her bedroom all summer. Oh and in my favorites
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maybe he could talk Sandra into expansion and pete's little sister and mom could do part time whoring to!
Well done. I really liked how you developed the story. It deserves at least another couple of chapters.
That seemed to be too good a story idea to just end there. I sure do hope there might be more episodes!
... I ever saw a setup for a great series, this is it. More, please!
Sequel please... Pete & Anne as a couple (jealous girlfriend). Also want Lenka in the scene.
Write more of this story, it has such a great story line.
This could be a great series of a young man becoming a hired out dick. You really need to tell us more of the kid taking care of all the women in town.
You don't see the ned for ANY buildup at all. It's OK, fuck, suck, felt good, let's do it again. He starts out a virgin who's never even SEEN a bare tit, andt next thing he's naked with his cock geting sucked. Boom!
All the potential for discovery is simply blown by (pun intended).
A waste.
Seems you have decided not to continue the story as it was submitted more than 2 years ago and nothing since, please do continue the story.
Great story. Well paced and well written. Would be great to read more of it.
As usual: unusual premise and setting. Well written. Good detail. Keep them cumming.
Add more stories or chapters to his experience during his summer job and perhaps beyond.
Cool story Loved the job idea...
But another story would be nice.
The world needs more stories like this. And I need more of this story.
Loved the story. I'm checking back every day to see when the next section is posted. I can't wait
You definitely captured the teenage first nerves and giggles perfectly in this story. I love how you let there be real feelings and emotions, amongst all the hot, sexy fun to be had by all.
Thanks for all the positive comments.
This story was getting long when I wrote it, and at seven Lit pages, seemed too long to post in a contest. When the contest is over, I'll probably go ahead and post part 2 since most of it is written already.
Thanks for your support!
He will owe his brother forever! What a wonderful thing for a brother to do for his younger brother.
Well done! Thank you.
Loved it.. man that sounds like a bomb job. *jellus*
There was a few errors, but I knew who/what was being refered to. 9/10
Great premise and characters. Loved how the story was interwoven with erotic details without being over the top. Much enjoyed.
An excellent story for all the average guys out there.. I hope that there is a continuation
I liked this. A regular guy with maybe a little larger than normal dick gets the girl. I would like you to continue the story focusing on his relationship with his new girlfriend.
combines excellent technical skills with a wonderful and erotic imagination. The stories always flow and never disappoint!
This was an engrossing story. One that every guy who has a heartbeat can remember dreaming. Only you told the story better then I ever thought. Please keep this story like going for just anouthe chapter or two. OH to be 18 again and know what I know now.
Really enjoyed the story but dont stop what is an obvious series at 1 story
All your stories are great and this is no exception. Hopefully you will keep this one going as well as your others!
This was a nice read, and if you are out of touch with the now teen generation, very appropriate and in tune. Thanks!
Tx you slay me! Loved it. As the other person said, this would make another fine series. Hope you're working hard on the next installment of CvN. :)
Loved it, and we hope that you will follow up with a series, as I am sure that you will have plenty of fans.
From a U.K. fan