All Comments on 'Summer Sues'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Needs an ending

I thought this was an excellent piece of writing except for the ending. Why build up to a fun point with the second Sue and then have nothing left to show for it?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
You must be a sexy guy

This story had a nice rhythm to it. I liked it, but you must really be a sexy guy to attract chicks like that!

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