All Comments on 'Summer Sugar'

Stand alone or part of a series?

This story has got to a few? more chapters. Damn good writing.

Only one tiny writing error.

I am not a fan of eposodic stories, however, this story NEEDS more episodes.

Well done in so many ways - please retell us more!

Incredible! Just incredible! My heart is beating so loud... so turned on!

This is no doubt the best piece of erotica I've ever read and I have read lots. The story develops in a gentle, believable and very sensuous way.I could go on for a long time but will closely pleading with you to continue this enthralling tale. Thank you.

Well done! Looking forward to the next episode!

Thanks to all who have commented both publicly and privately. While not a seasoned writer by any stretch, my partner thinks I have interesting stories and need to share them. She's always telling me to "write that down" when reliving those moments with her. It truly is a labor of love, and gets really interesting when telling her more about my past, and we both get so turned on by it. So, apologies for any delay of "Sugar" part two, but now I hope you understand why. ~Mons

I enjoyed this story greatly. It was well written, and the protagonist is quite sexy. Thank you for sharing this with us!

could lead to an interesting life as described in this story. What's not to like about it?

It's a hot story!

Really enjoyed it ...

and Ashley going out of the bathroom-superb surprise

5 and faves...hope you keep on writing more...!