All Comments on 'Summer Vacation to Remember Pt. 02'

by jacobmerriweather

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pure unadulterated garbage

Badly written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
AMAZING

one of the best ive ever read. just ignore the haters in life.

shysuzyshysuzyover 8 years ago

Another really hot story - don't stop writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good job

Include more characters in the story like the mothers. Turn them into cum buckets too

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Add more

Hope you write a few more chapters. Ruin these girls at school via a leaked video or something.

spankfunforspankfunforover 8 years ago
Exciting Vacation!

Vacation is About Doing Stuff You Wouldn't Do At Home! The Girls Will Never Forget ALL the Sex And Their TOO- HONEST Dads! Great Story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
it's disgusting

That people get off to such a depiction of misogyny and brutality.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Rough

This was a little harsh for my taste, but your warning was fair and appropriate.

defcon3defcon3about 7 years ago
great ending

your story sure lived up to the warning. im glad we have this little venue to live out some of our dreams. while this is something i would never even think about in real life, its nice to have a fantasy. thanks for the great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Part 3

Turn them into sluts at home. Write more mate.

LolomitdoppelOLolomitdoppelOover 5 years ago
Rough fucking makes me so horny

I know its wrong, but fucking like this makes me so horny! I got so wet from reading! Make me your dirty cumslut. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You piece of shit! You should burn in hell for writing this shit!

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCeleste9 months ago

It was rough and a terrible lesson to learn. You just can’t trust losers but they knew who they were dealing with and went back. I think I would have rather had my father beat the hell out of the guy than suck my dad’s cock and told a lie about how many cocks I sucked while there. But it was not my story just an alternative ending. Good story and it was hot I came repeatedly.

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