All Comments on 'Summer Vacation with My Cousin Ch. 01'

by Giggidy95

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Why present tense?

Most aspiring would be writers don't have the skills to make their stories work in present tense. Yours is unfortunately no exception. The end result is usually just to annoy the would be readers to the point that they give up. Again yours is no exception.

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
what an erotic story

damn am I hard. Why not bury his face in her squirting pussy?

Do you have another chapter with making love

Giggidy95Giggidy95over 7 years agoAuthor
There will be a continuation of this so it will get better

Prop69, to address your question as to why he didn't bury his face in her pussy, do keep the following in mind:

(1) Cousins sharing their fetishes for the very first time

(2) There will be a continuaton of this story. Sometimes you have to start off slow to make a story better lol

Don't worry it will eventually happen

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