All Comments on 'Summer Vacation with My Cousin Ch. 02'

Prefer a little less farting and more eating pussy, but still enjoyed the story

Present tense is almost always a bad idea, with few limited exceptions. This is true for first or third party narration. Any story being told is necessarily a recount or rendering of what has happened.

Also, constructive criticism can be helpful to one who wishes to develop.

Love the story. Left hanging at the end wanting more. Wish you would have keep going

he cares more about her belly than her pussy...