All Comments on 'Summer with Becky Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

very good I'm waiting for Ch. 02

smydlolsmydlolover 12 years ago
Fantastic.

Keep it up, you have massive potential. c:

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
HOT

THAT WAS AMAZING CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more please

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great.

Very well done! Superb!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
crap

More crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Awesome story!

Pleeeease continue writing. It's a marvelous story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

Short and direct. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
g8

It was very sexy and horny 10/10marks so happy with the story writing for next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Story

wonderful, i love it

The only thing missing, i think you should have mentioned protection, whether you used a condom or she was on the pill.

OedipusErectusOedipusErectusover 5 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for sharing this sweet and engaging story. Not only was it decidedly sexy but it provided an intimate view into what can only be described as the spontaneity of sibcest. No doubt both of them had been enamored of the sexual charms of the other to such an extent that, when the opportunity presented itself, they dove in head first. And I would predict that that stormy afternoon was only the beginning.

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