All Comments on 'Summer with Michelle'

I loved reading this and didn't want it to end.

Looking forward to more stories from you.

I enjoyed this first time story far more than I should but I don't care, it was sweet and struck just the right places in my heart. Hopefully there's more of these two in the future.

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I really enjoyed your first effort.

Delightfully naïve and experimental and sweet... what first sex should be!!

No one goes on a walk like that normally.

Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed the experimentation, and ending up going all the way and unprotected too. Very hot first time story

While this story is mostly believable, there are bad spelling errors and then there is this 8 mile walk.

I remember how this "first times" was ever so many years ago. Brought back good memories.

It's eerie how this could have been a story about me. Kudos

DON'T STOP! DON'T STOP!!! :+)))

Wow... I really like this Michelle girl, she was funny and enticing at the same time. Fantastic read, i look forward to chapter 2.

Several revisions to the grammar of this story. Thanks to all who commented. RL

Incredible story!! Keep writing.

or you're gonna make babies. That's the way it's been for thousands of years.

Reminds me of an old joke; Question: What do you call a man and a woman who don't use protection? Answer: Parents.

Great story, by the way. Oh to be that young again!