All Comments on 'Summer with Shell'

by jeremygrey

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LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
NOT BAD FOR THE FIRST STORY !!!!!!!!!!!! BUT

THIS STORY WAS NOT INCEST. UNLESS THE MOM WAS HIS. AND SHELL AND HER MOM JUST NOT THERE. YOU HAD A GOOD IDEA. TRY AGAIN , BUT NEXT TIME THINK THE STORY OUT FIRST....GOOD LUCK ...................................LAROC OF AGES

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good premise

for a sexy series. Flesh out the mom/daughter relationship to stay in this category, and let the guy reap the benefits.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
LAROC

Maybe it was Taboo. Isn't a mother licking cum off her daughter's face at least a little Taboo?

RecHikerRecHikerover 11 years ago
Great Start

You did a fine job building the characters in this part of the story. I would like to see how the story continue. It was very clever of you for dropping the hint about the mother/daughter relationship between Shell and her mother, which some readers apparently didn't get. HINT: Go back and read the part where Shell's mom enters the room - while Shell is fucking......

Keep up the good work and post another chapter soon! Thanks for sharing!

RecHiker

milfockermilfockerover 11 years ago
Great story

would love to see more from you - perhaps Shell's mum can be his new FTF for the rest of summer?

ES003ES003over 11 years ago
Excellent first story!

Yes the follow up is awaited! possibilities are endless. Others in the family, even Dad might get into this once he finds out. Maybe a gf or bf added. nice very nice and wet right now.

brosismombrosismomabout 11 years ago
good

but would of liked explaination(back story) on why her mom had no problem sucking her daughters pussy and getting fucked by him

why do DADS always go to store as soon as they come back from holidays,when the daughter is getting fucked ?

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

I fucking hate bossy bitches. Mr. No Name gets a pass because he's a virgin. This story should have stopped here. 2*

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