All Comments on 'Summer's Blackmail Ch. 20'

What a wonderful chapter of Summer's submission to her Master, she finally submits to the joy of humiliation and of being fucked by strangers. Summer has become the slut teacher she was born to be.

Thank you for this chapter as it was worth the wait

thank you for this great chapter.....

but you are thinking about to finish this great story

please don´t do that, this is the best of all in internet.

There are so muck potential for more humiliat...

please write write write....

thank you again....

A gas leak caught fire and the resulting explosion and fire ended everything. Thank goodness. Just awful.

Your original story was great but as it has drawn on and o so it has become awful. Poor writing, total lack of imagination. One Star ... I will not waste my time with any further chapters

Hi - thanks for reading my story series. I understand it is not for everyone. But I appreciate any and all comments. Particularly, I like to receive constructive criticism as it helps in formulating the story line. But, if you don't like the story, just move on. It is ok and I do not take your comments personally...........hey everyone is a critic.

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It's really surprise. read this update in one go. hats off bro. please please please continue when ever you got time to update next chapter. Its like I addicted to your story and evry word you written I really enjoyed lot. I know bro your hard effort for this. THANKS BRO♥♥♥

It was a long wait of 4 months to get to this chapter. I hesitate to use the word disappointed, because clearly the author is doing his best and his only payment is the rating and comments. Most of us are thoroughly enjoying this story, I am sure. Let's just say I hoped for more bondage and the trip to Marcos, now delayed once again. This chapter is all about humiliation, which is fine when balanced with other aspects of her training, but by itself is not quite what I expected. Looks like a long winter until Chapter 21, which hopefully will indeed be the trip to Marcos.

I was going to express my disappointment, but having read aznlookinguy, he makes a good point. No way the author can please all of us, but like aznlookinguy, I hoped for more than humiliation. The theater scene was just too long, the lack of bondage scenes and bondage wear (collar, leash, chains, cuffs) was regrettable after such a long wait. It was good to read the author's comments. Perhaps he can give us hope for Chap 21 before spring. Until then, the last bedroom scene with Summer in bondage will have to suffice.

I really can't wait for Todd to humiliate his teacher in school, maybe with bondage behind the desk without the othe classmate notice it, stockings, heels, vibrator... I prefer school days over week-end ;-)

but it´s time for an hostile takeover from calvin. He wants to keep her secret and uses submission, thats the better storyline, Todd goes to far.....

Thank you for taking your time to work out an exit and not throw away a great series lIke they did with Beyoncé in Bondage

I liked the way you used the theatre, having summer see a woman being used by 2 men and being used by 2 then many men herself. I would like to see her taken back to the sex shop, bound and tormented with clamps, weights and floggers. Maybe she would be put on stag for a live bondage show. Have her beg to suck cock, to be fucked to cum. I am hoping when you decide to have Summer's story come to an end, you will maybe become a theatre slut in the sex shop or something not too drastic.

Please ignore the negative comments as already said you can't please everyone all the time. I am eagerly awaiting Summer's tattoos and piercings. Please reconsider the original plan of the thigh tattoo. I would like to see a steady progression of tattoos as She descends further into humiliation and slutdom. Ejaculating cocks, slut statements etc as She loses her job, family stars in porn movies. I would love to see some throat and neck tattoos stating her sluthood and craving of humiliation. As you can see I have a fetish on tattoos and piercings Please continue I love this story best regards Fred

anyone have chapter 16?enjoy reading stories that are believable.love reading how far a woman can be pushed. things she can do.fake pretend stories sure. but could it happen??... realism. I see women every day that fit into Summer portfolio

Hello, I just saw where my original chapter 16 submission has been rejected by the site's editors. I had to re-write a portion as I had accidentally indicated that a participant was under the age of 18....that certainly was not my intention or desire. This is a fantasy, but I am in no way interested in portraying minors in my story. I have reworked chapter 16 and resubmitted it. It should be posted this week. Again, I apologize for this inconvenience. I hope that you like the story line of chapter 16.

MJ

A revised chapter is posted. Sorry that there was a slight whoops in the story sequence.

I know this comment should be in Chapter 19, but the thought just came to me.

I loved the introduction of Midge's character, because it allows for a prequel if you wanted. How she got to where she is now from where she was (and we already have an idea how her story ends), plus Todd's story to becoming a well trained dom with Bill Fraser's help and how he learned to take control the way he does

every day I think of this story. keep seeing Summer at airport waiting on husband arrival home.so funny he would never recognize Summer.if they don't get divorced before he gets home...

maybe teacher is wrong profession Summer clearly has...other talents...

sad Summer didn't pay for drinks at bar.Barb clearly lost money while busy with Summer in bathroom.

keep picturing the movie theatre.in couple section well master and Summer...they not a couple...she is still married.couple section is fine but I keep thinking Summer should spend some time in singles section of adult movie place.

Summer wants to keep her husband.job.family. yet doing everything to destroy those things.lol. awesome funny story

This is the most amazing submissive story I've ever read. The creative juices flowed the entire series making this a most erotic novelette. Congrats on being doing such a fine job. Can't wait for the next titalatting chapter of Summer's new life. GC

Like the way Todd is making progress in coveting her mentally n physically! When he finishes with her complete her submission summer tolerance should be zero tolerance! I would hav Todd introduce Melanie as her second slave call her over to summers place but hav her face covered! Make them both do sum sexual acts n hav Todd give authority to Melanie to be in charge of summer! Hav summer accept the offer before showing Melanie's face! The reaction would be epic! Hav Melanie hav revenge over her for not listening to her regarding helping her in her grades! Hav Mel move into summer place n hav take over house! Her clothes etc etc! Hav Mel get her dressed every morning for more humiliation!!

and maybe more after that. This story is so original and creative I have read it twice now, really love it. I want to see what happens next. Please write the next chapter.

My Mistress ordered me to read this great story while im jerking and cum every morning and night for about a month... Deep in me im Summers...thanks

Suzan Slut

I have enjoyed the story so far. I won't try to guess what else you have planned for Summer, but I am eager to read more

When can we expect chapter 21

I realy have enjoyed the story so far, and i realy hope there is going to be a next sequel.

I have never posted a comment on a single story on Lit, but I love this series! I eat it up! I keep checking back, hoping for the next chapter to be ready - please post it soon! I can't wait to see what Summer gets up to next and I really want to know what will happen when her husband gets back!

I'd have the husband show Todd what it's like to pick on someone his own size and I don't think I'd leave him alive.

I hope this continues, i have been looking for the next chapter everyday and keep hoping that today will be that day

To all of my fans & readers, I am almost done with Chapter 21. I apologize for it taking so long!

Thanks for theupdate great stories cant realy blame u for the long absense its got to take alot to write this much and keep it new feeling everytime

Thanks for the update Wilcox. I am really looking forward to the next installment.

Best regards

Fred

Great I can't wait.. :)

I can not continue reading any more of this story. It is a fantasy but it has gotten way out of hand. Summer keeps say "What is happening to me" but we all know that it is a writers fantasy and not based on real life. Everyone is against Summer and she has not friends at all. Not read about her husband or sons but right now, who cares. I am surprised that Summer is not catatonic right now. However, thank you for the build up to this point. I hope that you write some stories that do not involve so much degradation and the character does get out her situation without being a total slut with no thoughts of her own.