All Comments on 'Summertime'

don't stop now, waiting for more

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but paragraphs are your friends. could've used a little format editing. otherwise, good stuff.

Nice quick hot story just like it is, but I wouldn't mind reading more!

Your story is simple and believable. Short paragraphs and short stories are best. I think there is room for two or three more episodes.

No enormous cocks or mammoth mammaries. Keep them real. Maybe the sister is shy....

Yes!

More please.