All Comments on 'Summoning the Incubus'

I honestly really enjoyed this. I don't often check the new stories out because I like reading completed stories, but I'm happy I went ahead and clicked on yours. It's rather refreshing and I hope you continue writing and expanding on this little story.

Excellent writing, I would really look forward to the next instalment.

Five stars. this is an amazing story and i for one hope you write more like it soon. Thank you for posting it.

Continue plz

do continue please!

We need more joor

looking forward to more!

But it was over too soon

Keep it up that was brilliant

Just loved this! Chapter 2 must happen!

Plz do a ch 2!!! This story was creative and different, but soooo hot and sexy!

Chapter 2 please!! Your readership begs of you!

Please a part 2!!!!

Sorry for the 2 stars. I meant 5 but screwed something up. I absolutely love your command of the language, and aside from a few typos, it reads incredibly well! Please continue with this genre -- you are very good at it. The POV, the slightly archaic tilt to the narrative, really do it for me. Not to mention that it is damned erotic! If I can figure out how to change my vote, rest assured I will. Cheers!

Very nice,.

Or should I say unholy lol, WOW that was so awesome I loved every bit of it!

You are a amazing writer ,Nonhuman is your nich ,. Your description of her emotions and physical sensations ,the reader would feel what she felt .Please continue the story .

I'd like to know how she faces her family and what happens next.

That was an amazing story! You used good detail, and I can't wait to find out how she faces her family! Please keep up the amazing work

Such a good story. I hope you continue this story.

Beautifully written, you should be pleased with yourself. From the response you've gotten, I think you can see that your words both entertained and aroused. Job well done! Please continue!

This was hot! I liked that the whole point was the lead character taking power and pleasure for herself, that's a big deal for me. I love strong leads. I'd love to see more!

Powerful story..loved it. Very erotic arousing...and yet fun! Thank you.

I was not expecting this much of a response! You guys are all such sweethearts! I can't wait to finish writing the next part for you. Thank you for all your support and encouragement, it has honestly made me a little bit emotional. Betty xxxxx

I want more of them two!! <3

You had some typos but otherwise, this is a great story and they have SUCH WONDERFUL WONDERFUL CHEMISTRYYYYY!!

This story blends well-crafted writing with genuinely erotic sex. The backstory is better than many longer ones, and leaves the reader more invested in the character. I am a fan of horny, well-endowed, supernatural monsters, and this demon is nicer to his lover than many a monster with giant cock in the annals of Literotica.

This is a fabulous blend of erotic and actual story that I really enjoyed. The witch gaining her power and enjoying every minute was a nice twist. I would love to read more.

I loved this, how she reveled in her pleasure, it was just so HOT. please right more!

Please write more ugh internet fails.

I want more of them! Instantly fell in love.

Well done! I can wait for you next one!!

*purrs* MORE PLEASE

That's not enough! I want a continuation of this!

The demonic prince is an intriguing and enticing character. Surely, she'd keep summoning him even without the need for power. ;D

I loved that story!! God damn that was the best incubus/demon story I have ever read.

Had me excited the whole time! This story was amazing and it's rare for me to find stories as amazing and unique as this! Please keep up the creativity and amazing writing!

Absolutely awesome! Honestly just want more and more and maybe he'll come back and claim her?!! Can't wait, please continue! Thanx

I really hope they'll see each other again. That was delicious!

This was one of the best stories I have ever read!!!! Please continue!!!!!! Please !!!!!!!!!

Exemplary prose. And hot, too.

You are an exceptional writer.

D

I for one would love to see her as she begins to mature as a witch. Once a century? Surely she will want to see him again long before that right?

This is the absolute best I've found of this nature!! Please please please I beg of you do a continuation! And I assure you, we won't complain one bit if it's longer! I've been engrossed in stories that were 15 pages long per entry/chapter. PLEASE continue this tale!!!!

Sorry that took so long! Hope you like it!

- Betty xxx

Awesome sex and magic powers? Sign me up!

Holy hell.. This is one of the best stories I've read in quite some time!! You're a better author than I am, I'll admit it without shame. I love how you are never repetitive in your vocabulary and you are so deliciously descriptive. This was an amazing read and it made me pant with want just at the thought.

Don't stop writing, by any means!!

Tara

Oh please make a part two and many more! This was too damn hot! I came as soon as he finished in her pussy. That was truly great work and a great intimate story. Please keep up the good work.

This was incredible - very hot and thrilling. Please do make more!

Yes yes yes yes yes! A part two is essential! I CAN'T WAIT to find out what happens next!

There should definitely be a next installment

More please

Develop the plot

As fine a piece of writing as I have read in here, look forward to the other chapters.

Enjoyed this may futurechapters be as tightly scored and ploted

djb

I love this story so much, I know it was started years ago but this first installment is just so wonderfully written. Thank you!

wow

Nice....please continue

Super super hot, Betty! Your made me want to be a demon! Excellent writing skills. You should consider actually writing a book and seek a publisher. The skill level is in there. I'll buy your book.

Literotica has many Sucubus stories. I am so happy to see an Incubus story with female empowerment.. I just discovered this in 2023. I look forward to the future stories