All Comments on 'Sun Burn'

On the first page you used an italic font. Why??

That just makes it hard it read your work. Italics should only be used for emphasis, and very sparingly, if used at all. I've got to give you points off for that.

Great theme.

This was one of the best on here in a long time. The italics were much less of an issue to me that to one of the other reviewers. Good grammar and readable paragraphs are way more important.

Loved the story. Found it well written and an easy read. Having had the opportunity to gather some rays in the nude with my wife, on our deck, I found this tale very stimulating. Unfortunately my experience didn't end up as erotic as this

Great story! perfect teasing and good pacing to the climax. Well written scenario, very realistic. Something I'd like to experience.

Excellent writing. You create very real characters and their dialogue is believable. One of the best stories on this site.