All Comments on 'Sun, Sand and My Cousin Abby Pt. 01'

Bit tame, but you got to start somewhere.

Cupcake: Can I be your daddy? Loved your picture.

It ended just as it started to get interesting. One star.

Good God! I'm so revved up and you cut me off. Hurry and put up the next part. Really, you should have had them all ready before posting any. If you think it might be enjoyable it is not fair to the reader who finds it exciting. Like being worked up to go for a cum and being made to stop. In fact, exactly like that.

Thanks for reading. It is only part one, there is much more to come over the next few weeks...

Can't wait to read the next chapter....

I read this story as a bed time story to my girlfriend, and we were both pleasantly surprised. Can't wait for part 3!