All Comments on 'Sun Stroke'

Also too much action in too little space--No build up

I'm sorry, but your story is as erotic as a mortuary report.

There is no sense of these people actually being humans with feelings, characters or personalities.

And I think you meant "complement" rather than "compliment".

Don't know what the others are moaning about! I thought it was a great story. Nice and quick and just dirty enough to get the mind going for the action after dinnner!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Many couples' first swinging experience is just as spontaneous and unplanned as this one. A very realistic portrayal. Hope you plan on entertaining us with more exploits of these four...perhaps a reprise the next evening or weekend. Maybe both couples could discuss their feelings before arranging their next meeting.

This would have cintinued; so plase do.

I thought it was great. Not all stories have to be long epics. Keep up the good work

well done steph

story just got me going from the start - loved it