All Comments on 'Sunbathing'

"I made my way back to where my beer was warming in the sunshine." European beer is meant to be drunk at room temperature, not warm -- that's because it has an actual taste.

What a stunning vignette of a day in teh sun! I loved it, it contained innocence, lust, and erotically charged sensuousness. You must write more!

I wish I had a garden like this one. ;)

Meticulously and wonderfully written story. Enjoyed reading it and wished I were the young man enjoying the warmth and tightness of the naked woman s pussy.

What a pleasant story, nice build up with just the right amount of heat to a satisfying sizzling end. very clear, visual imagery. Just the right amount of descriptions. Nice work. I look forward to more

Deliciously erotic.

the nameless male in the story didn't stay around. They could have had a wonderful, sex-filled day together. Even so, it was a good story. Good luck in the contest.

What I hope for each time I am out there alone..a new hot strange cocks