All Comments on 'Sunrise Sunset Ch. 01'

by amofiga

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lost me within the first few lines.

Get help, learn about a space bar and how to construct a paragraph. Your story might be great, but it is unreadable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love it, more please

Excellent start of a lovely story, so hot. More please, thanks

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