All Comments on 'Sunrise Sunset Ch. 05'

Great series!

Thanks for this awesome tale, chapter 5 is slightly different. Hope you will continue your writing, reading your work is a treat. Good job and the series deserves its high score.

It was a great story about the fallout from selfish stupidity. And it was brilliantly written but...Jenny had to deal with ehr issues head on. Mike didn't make the effort to reconnect with his wife until she made the first step. And unlike poor Keith she will never learn that her husband was screwing around, or the swapping.

Great story

Sensitive, touching, romantic, raunchy - and hot !

The first 4 chapters were great, the 5th - even though you warned us - was a bit of a let down after what had gone before.

I wasn't keen on the 4-somes eithef, but the scenes with Mike and Jennifer were really good. Just a shame it all had to come to an end.

Rapier

Well done and good ending