All Comments on 'Sunshine'

This is so beautifully written and made me cry....

Thanks for your story. Well crafted.

Wat a beautiful love story. ...thanks for sharing

Beautiful,please write more stories

Best story I have read on literotica made me cry

Thank you for the most wonderful story. Laughter and tears. Joy and sorrow. All wrapped into a lifetime story. Thank you.

A beautiful story. It has me in tears.

I have been thinking about this story throughout the day after reading it, I had to come back to read it again....thank you for sharing this amazing and beautiful story.....thank you. ..

Heartbreaking and beautiful. You described the love that everyone dreams of. Thank you for that.

Thank you.

Crying 😭

A love like what you described is what many of our dreams are made of...so pure,comforting, and consuming. I wish I was crying but im actually having a panic attack because of all the sentiment your story conveys and the stark realisation and reminder of life and how more enduring it can be with an uncompromising partner. I only hope to find my 'one' someday soon and to live a meaningful and worthwhile life. Thanks!

Sweet, wonderful, beautiful, thought provoking and gut wrenching... What more could one ask... Thank you!

Thank you.

Absolutely beautiful. Bawled like a damn baby.

Possibly the very best story I have read here.

Outstandingly beautiful. I've never read a more loving story! Thank you for sharing.

i would like too find that one day :)

How dare you 😭😭😭😭 5 tears for you

Beautiful

I'm crying painful tears. I did not expect this.

This made me sob. What a beautiful story. It feels so real.

This was one of the best tributes to love I have ever had the pleasure of reading...through my tears😭

I cried in a public transport because of this. Thank you.

I think the perfect song for this story is "You are my Sunshine."

A beautiful story of two men growing in love together, deeply, and none of the usual stuff that makes so much of gay erotica boring and so alike. Applause, applause....

Ed

my friends are laughing at me and fuck them this hit home

This...This was absolutely beautiful, what a wonderful love story. I could not hold back the tears. I wish I could have this one day. Thank you.

I cannot believe that a single page story can possibly pack so many emotions, can make the characters so palpable, can engage the readers to such an extent. I am not the least embarrassed to admit that I am crying after reading this.

Amazingly, stylish piece of writing. Beautiful evocation of each moment in just a few words. Well done. No fool you!

I loved it. I was still expecting "Walk the Dinosaur" the whole time though.

it was so moving, I loved it. Thank you for writing this beautiful story.

Absolutely beautiful

It's been done before. While I liked the construction of the story, the flow was too fast and little description of physical places. I like the concept, but slow the progression of events and make the reader feel like they are really part of the story.

Great writing

Everything has been done before, you moron. This was heartfelt and sentimental, very sweet, and way beyond your comprehension. Obviously.

Beautiful...

I agree. This story seemed flat to me and a little on the stale side.

Not sure how to feel...thought provoking but i think it could have been longer and a bit more developed.

This was sweet and lovely! We all should be so lucky to describe our relationships this wonderfully!

The story was wonderful and so moving. It was truly a classic. Thank you. RDP

You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Sad but beautiful i really enjoyed reading this it made me smile and tear up thank u for writing this

Beautifully written. Lovingly read. Knowing the end before it arrived did not soften the blow. My tears are not for James and Theo, who had good full lives, but for myself...quite a bit short in the 'full' department. At my age, it would be wonderful to meet a Theo like in your story...and fill the space vacated by James.

Perfect.

Stunningly beautiful and my greatest fear all in one.

Fantastic love story. Wish it were true.

So beautiful, I wish everybody could have a love like this x