All Comments on 'Sunshine'

I really enjoyed this tale. Perhaps the husband and the other 'wife' will be able to join their fun, next year.

There are plenty of things to love about this story, but expressions like "lust muck" and "lady molasses" are a tad offputting. Still 4/5 for sure.

I quit at page 3 because I kept getting confused as to who was talking.

What a great story, so well described, the characters, the Location, the Sun and of course the sex.

Really really well thought out and written.

Wonderful!

Loved the 2 characters in this light romp in paradise. Excellent method of showing she had permission to 'cheat'. Really enjoyed how you used the trashy romance book writing to bring some levity to this tale. 2nd story of your that I read and won't be the last.

That's not good writing. That's really wonderful, creative, sensitive and expressive writing! Superb stuff.

Like a slow striptease so wonderfully described

With your stories I need a dictionary and a thesaurus. It's great! I am envious at the seemingly effortless alliterations. Thanks.

You have a wonderful way with words.

Connie's description of their lovemaking with her 'learning fingers' that eventually graduate upon the production of opus of Sarah's climax on page 3 is particularly masterful.

Bravo!

Should be marked as lesbian.

Very sweet.