All Comments on 'Sunshine at the Bachelorette Party'

totally discusting and not worth reading. Sunshine will not remain married very long. She's nothing but a cheating slut with no moral values.

The story is so implausible as to beggar the imagination: why is it people are always taping these events (usually surreptitiously) getting all the sound and pictures with one go that a Hollywood film crew would need several takes for) and then take no precautions to save the film

The sex scene is preposterously overblown

And the second pile of manure is the complaint that the protagonist shows poor morals - yeah, poor, or at least not what would give one the belief that the marriage had a good future?

SO WHAT? If one is reading this for moral instruction I think one is wasting one's time. Sadly, reading this particular story for any reason was a waste of time

the wimp eat that shit up.that why the writer stop there.when cockold writer write shit like this they ever finish.weak excuse for men.

sunshine just may be in trouble....i think she better find hubby some nice pussy so he wont divorce her sorry ass ...he might just do that any way

This is erotic writing at its best. Some of the best sex written on this site. More, more...

Why is it that nomatter how bad a story is, you can always find one anon ass who says" ignore the ass-holes. this was a great story."

the Ct. Yankee

Why is it that nomatter how bad a story is, you can always find one anon ass who says" ignore the ass-holes. this was a great story."

the Ct. Yankee

Sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

crap lower than cow dung!!!

Finish the rest of the story!

I hate those non finished smart ass stories

Bring on the lesbian orgy YAHOOOOOOOO!

There ain't nothin like it! All tongue and groove no bat and balls

Thanks for sharing this Non Finished story with us!

Love you all! GREG. No I love the women lesbian orgy parties

50 % FOR HALF A STORY! 50 % for the description of the fuck fest

Typical cheating whore bachelorette party story.

Damn you, you build up this great fucking story and then dont deliver the best part where he goes back to his wife and tells her not to come home, she can stay and fuck any stripper she wants.

WTF?!?!?!?!?!!? Leaving that out was just fucking cruel. You'd have gotten 5 stars from everyone if you wrote the actual ending a story like this would have.

almost as good as part 1

Someone among the direct participants or their acquaintances there would talk and it would eventually get back to a spouse. Then, of course, divorce and some poor schmuck would have wasted years with a treacherous spouse. Now that would make for a more interesting ending or sequel. People commonly misunderstand the expression 'once a cheater, always a cheater'. It doesn't necessarily mean the philandering spouse would do it again, but that they engage in an endless duplicity by not confessing and giving the other partner a choice to forgive and stay in the marriage, or accept, or have an open marriage. And the offender can't 'make it up' to someone who doesn't know you betrayed their trust. And will continue to abuse it as long as they don't know. It's a type of treason and unforgivable to many, including myself. I had a wife of 16 years something similar to the story 'Visiting Richard Gronier' where she thought she was making it up to me, but her workplace was too accepting of affairs, and she would not give up her job. So she became an "Ex" and bitterly so because I did not accept her argument.