All Comments on 'Super Bowl'

Nicely done

And if nameless hubby was fucking hot girl that weekend it would also be ok and she would be happy?

by the sond of it she already does not respect him anyway, this will happen more often

I dont think hubby thought of this when he said no to guests.Glad she isnt mine.Even for fantasy this lacked.

pollution on this site..

who pollutes this site

very hot

looking forward to reading more from you

Is this the perfect model of a wife that nobody would want? I sure feel sorry for the poor bastard she married. I'm not sure who that is though as there was only a tiny mention of the husband.

because of assholes who give any piece of trash a 5. The real "trolls" like bonnietaylor whose scores are meaningless and trash others for having opposing opinions.

Very nicely done! Great fantasy!!

And wants to make love to his wife since he's missed her? What is she going to do? I hope she made enough money to pay for her attorney because her husband is going to take one look at her, know what she has done. And then he's going to divorce her. The story idea started out okay, but the conclusion was just awful. Not enough background to understand her motivations (other than her being a slut). The sex scenes were barely passable. In the end, I just didn't care what happened to her. She was a thoroughly unlikeable character. Not a fun read. No stars.

As soon as she said: "I would do it, and behind my husband's back"...i knew that this was about another cheater, excusing her cheating with renting the room...And then she cheated and cheated all night long and never a simple thought about the man she should love: her husband!!! And in the morning no remorse and even she was happy!!!! If she got a serious STD that would be a happy ending...1*

Gawd I love a married slut. 5*

"kiss me she did... "

"And cum she did, "

It was nice, I liked it, I did.

I don't know if your story is true, but it sure seems realistic. Unlike some critiques, I would bet that you would greet your husband with new-found enthusiasm. Unique story line too.

OMG, Dee is so naughty. What a loose girl. I have to imagine that she planned to cheat from day one. Lordy, and she let Tom--a near stranger--pop a load into her. She might have some explaining to do if she misses her next period, lol. Tom! WTF!?! Can't you at least pull it out? No, you just had to seed the hostess, didn't you? Men and their damn sperm create all kinds of problems in this world.

I liked this story a lot because it was just so plausible and real. It wasn´t some wild swingers tale or hot wife couple story.

Well, these kind of “one off” encounters do actually happen even to people who are not in the lifestyle. The writing style of this story was just a no-nonsense retelling of what happened.

Kudos! Good job!

She sure showed her husband, didn't she? Mindless cunt...

Where did you mention that hubby was going to be out of the house for the entire Super Bowl Weekend? I kept expecting him to burst in on them and start blasting away with his gun. Oh well, just a random thought - I guess. Other than that, a well written, and good story!

Stop writing shit like this.

A unique setup to a hot and well-described threesome. There isn't a lot of meat to this story, but as a quick "flash tale," it works just fine.

Where is the meat?

and I won't give you 1 star. Every time I walk into it blind, that's what you get.

3rd paragraph has a good clue!

More cuck crap! Wife has a stupid idea, hubby disagrees, wife goes ahead anyway and hubby now has a whore wife. Not erotic in any sense of the word!

Hope hubby finds a woman he can trust!!!

This is a great story. Don't let the Ignorants in the above comments get you down.

There was zero cuckolding in this story. There may have been cheating but who doesn't love a wife that takes another man's cock every once in a while? Maybe after this she will invite the two back and hubby can have a chance at some hot mature pussy?

Again, great story. Keep 'em cummin ;)

....I suggest you reject the bad advice below and pay rapt attention to all the feedback.

While I do not care much for cuck stories....and make no mistake, this is one....yours was well written and very erotic. Your style is engaging, if a little less personable. I think you could create richer characters by telling us a little of the sorry rom within their minds....

Please write again.

I would also take it as a personal favor, if you wrote something along the lines of a couple getting into a foursome on that same weekend.....at least that way, you give the husband some little semblance of dignity, even if you rob him of fidelity.

The naughty factor is fun, until the rational mind considers the consequences of these events.

Most of them will never be perceived by the actors, because they do not feel the subtle, but inevitable shift in their persona. With each new encounter, they become a little less the persons they were and more something else....something less desirable to those who seek real happiness....and less capable of having it.

There will be many who poo-poo these thoughts, but they, like you know in your depths and silent moments, that I am absolutely and undeniably accurate.

The fall of every great civilization began and escalated with the fall of the people into the worship of the illicit, the carnal and the sensual aspects of humanity.

So, tickle your little kitty, pound your pud....knowing that you are becoming lonelier and sadder each time you do that, instead of embracing someone you love and giving them the ultimate gift of yourself in love with them. Or, like me, that you are living the ultimate sadness of marriage without love. The loneliest of all men and women are these.

It was nice and richly told. It gave that ' real ' feel. Like it could happen. And it does.

very arousing, wonderful Az.

I give her marriage 3 years, tops.

Not erotic just slutty porn, would your wife do this, would you let her?

Quick read, well written and gets right to it. Easy to get into the story and feel as if I was present. Exactly the momentary escape that I was hoping for. I enjoyed. Thanks! tmmmbrrr

Easy to read, and hot descriptions, I loved it :))

Quick n easy

Another cheating wife story to skip.

I enjoyed this story ,even though it was a little short. Lol.. who cares what the negative sayers say. It was good for jerking off.