All Comments on 'Super Girl and Aquaman'

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maddictmaddictover 7 years ago

That was a speed o length story.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 7 years ago
Wrong superhero!

Aquaman wore a full coverage costume, of orange and green. However, Prince Namor, The Sub-Mariner, in the Marvel pantheon, wore only a speedo-like costume. All that Keenan would have needed was tiny wings for his ankles and pointed ears.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
you dont wear a pair of speedos

speedo is a brand of racing suit. you just wear 'a speedo', not a 'pair of speedos'. your story would be much better if you fixed that error. it might be nice to get some payoff of what they do after the party.

BigBeanieBigBeanieover 7 years ago
Too short

It reads like you got bored writing after you'd set the scenario up and just ended the story without anything interesting happening.

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