by TheDarkCloud
but not very real, 2 ppl on their own in a supermarket with no security? I don't think so......
Content was a little screwed up as in a supermarket at night there is usually some form of security. Also the birth control at the first part was unwarranted, especially for a single Mommy already through one pregnancy and surely would have accepted another one if for no reason but to provide a sibling for her son.
Who cares how real it is? I think that it is well written and the content is enough to fuel most mens fantasies
Thanks for the comments and votes and feedback. I was aware of the issue of no security guards in the store at night when I wrote the story and admit that it is not entirely realistic, sorry if that spoiled the story for anyone. However, I wanted to write the story like that and enjoyed doing so, not everything has to be ultra real, does it?
retail for many years and nothing like that ever happened to me...dammit all.